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Love is you.
Love is me.
Love is something you can't see.
Love is nice.
Love is sweet.
Love will sweep you off your feet.
Love is soft.
Love is best.
You can feel love in your chest.
Love is great.
Love is kind.
Love is always on my mind.
Love is special.
Love you chearish.
My love for you will never parish.
:icongraveyardprincess789:

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I wrote this when I thought I was in Love with someone, turns out that it was one sided....

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:iconkrollusk:
Well said...But the piece is still bordering on mediocre...
:icongraveyardprincess789:
Okay....

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missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
:iconclearconfusions:
cute in meaning, but i don't really like how you use love all the time. sorry, honey. you know i love you!
:icongraveyardprincess789:
It is no problem...I don't really like that one all that much anyways! It is WAY to not my style but I was in an unusual mood. I love ya too! ^_^

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missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
:iconcronopsys:
omg are you always such in love!! haha ;) its ok and they are nice thought from you..but I agree , the word love is too many time in use there! and love can be harsh and a pain in the ass some time lol but hey!! you're in love and I understand that! keep it up princess :) its a good poem nonetheless.

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::Les Blessures De L'Ame Sont Eternelles::
:icongraveyardprincess789:
I was in love.....it turned out it was one sided....but yeah I agree with you about the love thing....but that was how I was feeling at the time...and thanks for the comment. ^_^

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missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
:iconcronopsys:
Yeah its understandable ;)

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::Les Blessures De L'Ame Sont Eternelles::
:icongraveyardprincess789:
^_^ Right...shit happends. :D

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missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
:iconcronopsys:
shit happends O_o *confuse* lol

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::Les Blessures De L'Ame Sont Eternelles::
:iconnecromancer4285:
I know all about 1 sided love .... :sniff: it hurts...nice piece.

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February 22, 2005
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