The Circle
Life is magical
so is death
born one hour
in a crib the next
This is forshadowing
to something forgotten
soon after your birth
it's to the cofffin
Crib to coffin
cradle to grave
this simple circle
keeps us enslaved
this special plan
no way around
in dear sweet time
your in the ground
First your born, then you die
always remember
they say you'll live forever
and thats
a
lie
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One of my best poems in my opinion.
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That is an amazing poem.
I can't believe this hasn't been jumped on and commented to death already.
I really really struggle to enjoy poetry. I have insanely high standards, I guess. But I actually did genuinely enjoy this. It's very different to my work, the imagery and the wording is lovely.
I'd say that the one weak line, and it's not even that weak, is "keeps us enslaved", something about it just doesn't sit right with me . . . But I don't know what.
May change when I read it again, it sometimes does.
Nice going.
cradle to grave
this simple circle
keeps us enslaved
oh god tis mazin very well done indeedy!!!!!!!!!
--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
--
missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
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missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
--
::Les Blessures De L'Ame Sont Eternelles::
Though, I don't agree that it's 'an amazing' poem.
It's a simple poem, but it works well with the idea that we have such a simple cycle to go through.
My clubs:
My Friends IRL:
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In the name of God, impure souls of the living dead
shall be banished into eternal damnation. Amen!
--
missed me missed me now you've got to kiss me
if you kiss me mister you must think im pretty
if you think so mister you must want to fuck me
if you fuck me mister it must mean you love me
if you love me mister you would never leave me
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